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2024届高三九省联考读后续写：海豚与志愿者的故事

Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks(水池) were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on (做暗查工作)Maya.

The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.

During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.

“Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused.

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Para1 “This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.

Para2 Now Katherine realized what had been going on.

文本解读：讲述了Hilda作为志愿者在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员Katherine一起工作，以及她们和聪明的海豚Maya之间的故事。

情节构建：

1.由第一段首句内容“‘这是Maya的秘密，’Hilda笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写Maya的秘密是什么?

2.由第二段首句内容“现在Katherine意识到发生了什么并进行道歉。”可知，第二段可描写Katherine的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。

续写线索：训练海豚——发现秘密——分析秘密——互相协商——共同配合——良好结果

Version 1

“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you. “Really? How do you know that?” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It took me a long time to discover this secret, too. It’s not easy to follow Maya.”

Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Catherine thought to herself, this is really a clever dolphin. And she said to Hilda, “Well, Maya loves treats, so we’ll work together, and you’ll secretly help her collect a few things and put them in the filter at the back of the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Good idea, let’s do it.” From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony. Maya’s performance in front of the audience is getting better and better.

Version 2

“This is Maya's secret," Hilda said with a big smile. Puzzled but curious, Katherine moved close to those items and found that they were wastes such as combs, paper bags, and so on. Pointing at the filter box in the back of the tank, Hilda explained to Katherine why these items were hidden underwater without being discovered. It was due to their flat and thin shapes that they were able to stay in the chinks (缝隙)of the box for a long time and haven't been cleared. Thanks to the keen sense of smell of Maya, she successfully found out where the garbage was and tried to inform people of the fact in her own way.

Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Knowing that she had misunderstood Hilda, Katherine's face flushed with embarrassment. Holding Hilda's hands tightly, Katherine looked into Hilda's eyes with newfound respect and said, "Thank you, Hilda. I owe you an apology." "No apologies necessary," said Hilda with a grin, "it just reminds me to be more careful in the future." After listening to their conversation, Maya leaped out of the water and drew a beautiful arc(弧形), as if she felt happy for such an ending as well. From then on, Hilda and Katherine became friends. They paid more attention to the intelligent animal and took care of her more carefully. It was Maya who brought the relationship between the two people closer.

Version 3

“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. In her hand, she displayed the items she had retrieved(找回) behind the filter box. “Maya has been trading these for treats during training. She's not just retrieving them; she's been cleverly exchanging them with you for rewards.” Hilda's voice was warm with admiration as she showed Katherine the little treasures Maya had hidden away. It was a clever game of give-and-take that Maya had mastered, turning her training sessions into a personal treasure hunt.

Now Katherine realized what had been going on. She looked at Maya, then at Hilda, and her stern expression softened into a smile. “I owe you an apology, Hilda. You've shown great initiative and care,” she said, her tone filled with newfound respect. Together, they watched Maya perform her tricks, understanding now that the dolphin's behavior was not a training issue but a sign of her intelligence and curiosity. The day ended not with blame, but with laughter and a sense of teamwork, as they all enjoyed Maya's clever antics.(荒唐行为)

Version 4

“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. She then gestured for Katherine to follow her to the back of the tank. Together, they peered(仔细看) behind the filter box, where Hilda carefully reached in. Her hand emerged holding a small, glittering object. It was a charm bracelet, shimmering with tiny beads. “Maya has been hiding things like this here,” Hilda explained, her voice filled with wonder. Katherine's eyes followed every movement, her initial disbelief slowly turning into fascination as she realized the depth of Maya's playful antics.

Now Katherine realized what had been going on. A look of understanding crossed her face as she watched Maya swim gracefully around the tank. “I misunderstood the situation,” Katherine admitted, turning to Hilda with an apologetic smile. “You've done a great job uncovering Maya's little hobby.” The atmosphere lightened(缓解), and the bond between trainer, volunteer, and dolphin grew stronger. As they watched Maya playfully interact with her hidden treasures, a sense of unity and joy filled the air, replacing any earlier tension.